I couldn't wait to share this poem. Coming up with the right words took a bit-very odd for me- I sat at my computer screen staring at it while typing, and erasing, typing and finally I knew I had the perfect set to tell this story. I know it will fill a lot of unanswered questions to my readers. I am proud of this piece, and I hope you enjoy- xo
12/10/2015 06:19:50 pm
This poem is really, really great! Is it about u and you're boyfriend? Such a neat consept
12/11/2015 09:03:43 am
Thank you so much! And, no it isn't about my current boyfriend. This is about a guy who I knew when I was 16. He was no good for me. My current boyfriend is my everything, and we will be together forever! Thank you for reading and enjoying it! :)
12/15/2015 02:30:57 pm
after reading this poem which was really so good i feel like im there visually b/c its so descriptive and genuine. im from NJ but went to nyc and passed over the bridge from youre poem. i can just imagine being young & in luv in the big city b/c it happened to me to. something magical about it let me tell you.
12/15/2015 04:06:23 pm
Thank you from the bottom of my heart, because I really needed to hear your kind words today. I appreciate it so much! And, I am so glad you took the journey as I intended while reading this. You are an awesome soul, and I can feel it within your comment.
Freak Wit It
12/20/2015 09:18:27 pm
I have a feeling that in a few decades time, students will be reading these early works in an English /literature class. Bravo, mate!
12/21/2015 06:04:11 am
Your words truly are beautiful. Thank you so much for reading, and saying those kind words. It gave me chills, and made me smile. Wishing you the best always! :)
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